Here is the latest version. It turns out the designer is not reading my blog. But she is a woman and I guess she just knows what a woman wants. I asked her to make the arm thicker (so the girl wouldn't look so skinny) and add more curve to the hip. I'm thinking it actually looked better with the skinny arm she originally did.
I also asked for new text but wasn't specific. Not sure what kind of text to ask for in the re-do. Thoughts??