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A *free* exotic dance and pole dance workshop - your opinions please

I'm offering a free workshop this month and I'm about to e-mail this link to several hundred women. Before I do, can you take a look and let me know if what I'm asking for on this page makes sense? I don't want anyone to be confused or offended by my requests. Here it is:

http://www.poleforthesoul.com/freeworkshop.html

Thank you in advance for your comments!

Posted on Jun. 1st, 2009 at 02:55 pm | | Leave a comment | 7 comments |

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darkphoenixrisn

I'd change race and races to ethnicity and ethnicities, but other than that, it looks good.
Posted on Jun. 1st, 2009 10:40 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

cagekitten

Great suggestion, thank you!
Posted on Jun. 2nd, 2009 04:59 am (UTC) | | Parent | Thread | Reply

i_feel_sick

yay!! I am buying my plane ticket soon I promise!! I just had to work out details of how I am getting to Port Angeles (wasn't sure if I was driving or flying, but decided to fly).

YAY!!
Posted on Jun. 2nd, 2009 11:13 am (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

cagekitten

You need to book at least 2 weeks in advance to get the best price. If you don't book in the next day or two, your ticket price will go way up! Hurry!
Posted on Jun. 2nd, 2009 05:40 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Thread | Reply

i_feel_sick

yeah, that's what my mom was just telling me too...I just needed to make sure I made enough money before leaving for Vegas to have fun money in Vegas AND money for my plane ticket..hehe. I think I will be ok..last night was good enough to me ;)
Posted on Jun. 2nd, 2009 09:03 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Thread | Reply

zepharum

I would be less specific about the weight. Personally, I find putting a number on what is larger to be sort of offensive and I definitely know women who would be offended by that wording. I'm 140lb, but I'm also 5'10" so I'm thin. There is a very big difference between 150lb and short, you know? I would maybe change that to plus sized? Or...I don't know really what would work better. Hopefully you get what I mean. :P
Posted on Jun. 2nd, 2009 04:35 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

cagekitten

This is exactly what I needed to know. As a 100 pound woman, I have no idea what weight is plus sized. I totally guessed and clearly I guessed wrong. Thank you!
Posted on Jun. 2nd, 2009 05:39 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Thread | Reply