Girl who dances in a cage (cagekitten) wrote,
Girl who dances in a cage

Looking for your suggestions

The S Factor pole school in Los Angeles has this fantastic tag line for their school that I just love and wish I had come up with. It goes like this:

It's your body...own it!

I think this line tells you everything about our kind of classes. It says that you learn to not only become comfortable in your own skin, but you learn to love your body and what it can do you and that will express through your every day life through renewed and greater confidence. Needless to say, I want that slogan! But it is copywritten.

I have been trying to come up with an alternate version of that slogan, but nothing I come up with can compare. The best I could come up with is "Rock your curves...own you body". But that just doesn't have the clarity and brevity that S Factor's slogan has.

Can anyone think of a similar slogan? Something that uses modern slang to express how confident you can feel in your body? Or maybe just a variation of the S Factor slogan.

What alternative version of this slogan can you come up with?


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