Girl who dances in a cage (cagekitten) wrote,
Girl who dances in a cage
cagekitten

How would you say this?

All you writer types, could you please help me phrase something correctly? My current registration process includes a check box they must check in which they agree to the no-refund policy. The order will not go through if they don't check that box. I've decided to add a second box that says something along the lines of...

I am a woman at least 18 years of age or older. I understand that if I am under 18 or not a woman, I will not be able to participate and I will not be given a refund.

Or maybe...

I am an adult female and can provide ID to prove that I am over the age of 17. I agree that if I am not at least 18 or older or not a woman, I will be turned away and I will not be given a refund.


Okay, those are both pretty sloppy. Can anyone help me make the wording more clear and professional? Thanks!

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