Girl who dances in a cage (cagekitten) wrote,
Girl who dances in a cage
cagekitten

please vote for your favorite

There are three very important facts missing from the main page of my newly designed website:

1. I am Seattle's FIRST pole dancing school.

2. The classes build confidence and self-esteem. This part is especially important because a lot of women mistakenly believe you have to have confidence to take this class. You don't, this is in fact where you go to build confidence.

3. This is not just some class where you learn sexy dance moves, it's an adventure of self discovery.

Please let me know which sentence below would best convey these facts, or at least which one sounds the best. Or feel free to write one of your own and post in comment. Thank you!!


Choose the best one:

Welcome to Seattle’s first pole dancing school. Dance and spin your way to a strong, fit and more flexible body while building confidence and discovering your power within!
8(28.6%)
Welcome to Seattle’s first pole dancing school! Discover a confidence you didn’t know existed as you tone your body and build strength and flexibility.
9(32.1%)
Seattle’s first pole dancing school. Not just a fitness program; an empowering and fun adventure to a more fit and confident you!
4(14.3%)
Seattle’s first pole dancing school! Not just a fitness program; an empowering and fun adventure to improved confidence, strength, flexibility and personal power through self-discovery and expression.
7(25.0%)
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