Girl who dances in a cage (cagekitten) wrote,
Girl who dances in a cage
cagekitten

your input please

For those feeling creative, I'm looking for your input and suggestions on how to add something to my business card. Below the cut you'll find a copy of my business card. I need to add the words "Pole Parties" to my business card and possibly even "Private Lessons."

The most logical place to put "pole parties" is right on top of the words "Empowering Fitness Classes incorporating." But then people will assume that it says "Pole Parties and Empowering Fitness Classes incorporating pole dancing, stripping and exotic dance." And I don't want potential customers assuming there is stripping at the pole parties. It's an option available only by request. And if they think it's automatically included, every shy gal who doesn't want to strip (which is a LOT of girls) will not want a party.

Where can I put "Pole Parties" on the card without associating it with stripping? It should be primary on the card, since classes are booked full for months but I have room and time for more pole parties so those need the promotion. Where would you move things around? Should I start over with a new design so both can be included? Should I make a separate business card for both pole parties and classes? Or can I work within this current design?



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And FYI - my number is omitted from the card on purpose. At this time the business is fine working only with people who have internet access. I would consider adding the phone number to the website, but not the business card.

Thanks everyone!
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